Saturday, June 29, 2019

corrected

the calm waters
that waved between her
and freedom

grew hard
in undercurrents
of turbulence

the rainbow
that shined across the
border to peace

darkened 
into a storm
of darkness

and no matter
what she said
and no matter
what she did

and no matter
what she was
and no matter
how she hid

nothing could stop
the authority of the land
from correcting
her spirit

as it pulled
her soul 
back home

(gone)





4 comments:

  1. Is there some irony that correction fluid is also known as white out? Merely rhetorical .... no need to reply. Apply? Re-apply?

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    1. mike nesmith likes this comment. i actually had the feelings to this poem before i was given this picture.... i was glad to have a place to put them.

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  2. Mike and I are glad for your reply - it seems a little window opened for a peek at your metier. I must return to this piece, and see what may be filleted by the results of my angling . . . .

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    1. let me know where your collections end up.... i need all the inspiration i can get

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