and the moon's
half smile
meeting again
after a long
while
hiding in
shadows
created by clouds
daring to
whisper
dreams out loud
hoping for a
time
when we are allowed
totally at
bliss
in the midst of a crowd
(proud)
I could comment on all your work. This one, and "ghost", are seamless weaves with several poems you have written lately. They make an excellent chapbook, Lynn. I do not believe you have as much satisfaction composing them as I do reading them, but you should certainly be proud of the result of your writing.
ReplyDeletethank you.... i do like the release i can get from a good ode. sometimes, nothing helps but an old movie, and long games of tetris, but those moments are happening less and less in the summer, thankfully :)
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