Reading your poems again, this one rhymed (luckily or unluckily) a Michael Nesmith song in my mind, and it brought a new meaning to the lyric in the possibility of the song being sung after the subject has departed. The pathos would then be nearly satiric, sadly. The song also appeals to me as a vision I have of your efforts . . . . apology for my linking thoughts of Propinquity https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2h7Nn7azsn0
Reading your poems again, this one rhymed (luckily or unluckily) a Michael Nesmith song in my mind, and it brought a new meaning to the lyric in the possibility of the song being sung after the subject has departed. The pathos would then be nearly satiric, sadly. The song also appeals to me as a vision I have of your efforts . . . . apology for my linking thoughts of Propinquity
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