and even when
you snore in my ear
wholeheartedly
myself throbs for
your being
internally
and even when
you make fun
of my "book"
give me that
one look
eat all the chips
like a crook
i can't tear myself away
you're the day i've been waiting for
(dawn)
Sweet - the italics emphasize, and the scan quickens. (dawn) is excellent for the ending with a literal and figurative meaning.
ReplyDeletethank you. i'd write this all in italics if i could. _oh well_
DeleteFoibles ... Endearing they can be.
ReplyDeleteNicely done.
thanks :)
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