all the rules
i had to break
just to be
with you
i forgot
the line i had
to follow
just to have
you near
but even when
it all seemed
too close
it wasn't
and even when
you didn't listen
to what i was
you did
offhand remarks
can be the key
to what once was
so important
i'll fight to
the death
for the success
of us
in so much pain
that's got to be
some rain
(new)
rememory is a good title - there is a film starring Peter Dinklage with the same title which I have queued. Rainsongs would be another good title for a work - or am I all wet ?
ReplyDeletethanks...i like rainsongs, too... i'm not very good at titling my work. george harrison, i heard, had the same problem, but his odes are much better :)
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