at what we were
i still don't understand it
can't think of you
and where we stood
i still can't face it
was i the bad one
the whole time?
did i not give you
every chance to be mine?
could your heart
ever truly turn
from the thought
of her
to the reality
of me?
how could i have
shown you
all i had
and still not see
that you never looked
at me
as any more
than a distraction
of the pain
you left behind
(blind)
audio version: https://soundcloud.com/jamison99/the-shadow-of-him-in-her-eyes
oh, and I forgot, I love your poem, from one who has just seen the reality of another's true nature.
ReplyDeletethank you for understanding. it helps me to write things out....
DeleteCan I have permission to copy this poem to my blog; it would help some other people I know, with your byline, of course. Hopefully, it will bring some traffic to your blog, if you are using ads.
ReplyDeletesure... if it will help people :) thank you.... a link back would be great.
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ReplyDeleteMy link above didn't work, please copy and paste. Thank you.
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ReplyDeleteThe story above is based on my true story; if you would like to read it. There are 3 parts.
i meant to tell you... i read this. very real! thank you for your gift of writing...
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